खुली पलकें 

Some loney nights, when we are exhausted , dream to sleep but coud’nt sleep. Eyes are tired ,body wants to rest . Mind but restless , no letting us sleep. Want to retire, feeling Tired, like a monkey in the rain and dead as Dodo , still no rest no peace ., 
Missing what? It is the real question , missing our loved ones living far far away . Seven oceans away , or Seven lives .. Answers are unquestionable 🙂 questions are unanswerable . I rest here ,letting the questions find their own answers… 

 with a small thought :
khuli palkon mein Raat palbhar mein guzar gayi ,khwabon ke galiyare se neend kahin ajnabi ho jaise.

खुली पलकों में रात पल भर में गुज़र गयी,

ख़्वाबों के गलियरे से नींद कहीं अजनबी हो जैसे .. “निवेदिता -Nivedita”

  
 


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33 responses to “खुली पलकें ”

  1. dhirajanand Avatar

    Let your soul search for the answers in day time. Good night.

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Hehe very fast and conclusive .. Easy to tweet .. Good night 🙂

  2. TylerLearnsToWrite Avatar

    Beautifully written 🙂

    1. bhaatdal Avatar
  3. DILKASH SHAYARI Avatar

    बहुत खूब

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      धन्यवाद 🙂

      1. DILKASH SHAYARI Avatar

        स्वागत है आपका जी.

  4. dhirajanand Avatar

    Did you get the answers?

      1. bhaatdal Avatar

        I ll have to find myself

        1. dhirajanand Avatar

          All the very best!

  5. Nitin Avatar

    Adore words here Nivedita. And the perfect ending 🙂

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Thank you so much for the words of appreciation 🙂

      1. Nitin Avatar

        You’re welcome 🙂

  6. fairytaleofasimplegirl Avatar

    Oh man!what a beautiful piece.

    1. bhaatdal Avatar
  7. fairytaleofasimplegirl Avatar

    Nind kahi ajnabee ho jaise!wah wah

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Thank you dear 🙂

  8. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

    Sounds like a pretty disturbed night, thoughtful nonetheless. Beauty in words 😉

  9. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

    Sounds like a pretty disturbed night, thoughtful nonetheless. Beauty in words. 😉

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      🙂 away from my ten year old .. Couldnt sleep when she is away

      1. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

        You have a 10 year old? :0 I’ll try to believe that. lol
        On a serious note, its so sweet. I cannot really say I know how a mother feels

        1. bhaatdal Avatar

          Yup ten year old and fifteen years of marriage .. Lol .. Hey no lol I take it as compliment and yes only a mother can know how it feels. I too knew the feeling when I earned her in my life . Debt of a mother is indebted ..

          1. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

            Thats the sweetest I have heard today. Im sure you are lucky. Happy mother- daughter <3

          2. bhaatdal Avatar

            Indeed !! Amen

  10. JokerShayar Avatar

    बहुत बढ़िया 🙂

    “खुली पलकों में रात पल भर में गुज़र गयी,
    ख़्वाबों के गलियरे से नींद कहीं अजनबी हो जैसे”

    भूल तो गया हूँ उसे, पर आँख ये क्यूँ भर गयी,
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    ,
    ,
    पत्थर हुए दिल में कोई आह अब भी दबी हो जैसे,, !!

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Bahut khoob , dhanyawaad

    2. bhaatdal Avatar

      बहुत सुँदर ,भावों को शेर में व्यक्त करने के लिए आभार . इससे मेरी कृति की इज़्ज़त बढ़ी hai

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