सोते सोते जाग गई ,
कहीं खोते खोते मिल गई ,
स्वप्न देखे जो बचपन में,
अर्ध योवन में जी गई ,
सोते सोते जाग गई ..
स्वप्न में तुझसे मिली ,
बंद आँखों में छिपी ,
तेरी तस्वीर कोरे काग़ज़ ,
पर उकेर गई ,
सोते सोते जाग गई ..
पता कहाँ था मालूम ,
नींदों में गलियाँ देखीं,
ढूँढते हुए तुझे,
कहीं तेरे दर पे आगई,
तभी सोते सोते जाग गई…
तूने भी झूठे स्वप्न दिखाए
उन सपनों को सच मान गई
कड़वे बोल ज्यों ही तेरे
मेरे कानों में पड़े
सोते सोते फिर जाग गई.. “Nivedita”
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कौन है इतना निर्दयी की आप से कड़वे बोल सके? भगवान माफ़ नहीं करेगा उसे।
बेहतरीन काव्यरचना है, अद्वितीय।
धन्यवाद धीरज जी , भगवान सभी को माफ़ करे और करता रहे , और ये कविता जो मेरी कृति है आसपास घटित होने वाली कोई भी घटना या शब्द से जुड़ी है , मुझे मेरे मित्र ने कहा, सोए नहीं या सोते सोते जाग गए , बस उसी पे लिखदी मैंने मुँझे किसीने कड़वे बोल नहीं बोले हैं । कविता को एक मोड़ देके छोड़ना मेरी शैली बन गयी है । सभी ख़ुश रहें ऐसी प्रार्थना होनी चाहिए
Beautiful. I had my friend read it to me and explain the meaning.
You have an ecstatic imagination I must say.
And looks like someone is finally out of a block with a bang. Good job Nivedita.
Thank you Sonu for so much effort and pain taken by you. It is encouraging and motivates me to write :):) thanku thanku pal
Nivedita, its a pleasure reading your blog. Theres so much substance in everything you write. Food to the soul, like I always say. Or to put it in a batter way, bhaat and dal to the soul ;).
Thanks to you for serving it the best ways possible 🙂
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Wah wah wah wah wah
Yes ur back with bang
How do u even think that way
For me it’s like soother to my senses yr creations calms me down
Hey swapnil you are too too kind , otherwise nothing as such very simple words and a simple poem written in half sleep .. 🙂 but thank you for motivating.
I don’t yar bit they definitely soothe me
Btw thankyou for reading lihaaf on extinct0703
Thanks to u. ..
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beautiful…..!!!!!!!
Thank you, glad you visited and liked .
my pleasure
this is so so beautiful Nivedita ! The feelings were lingering in each of the words.
Thank you Nitin , I feel so motivated when a brilliant and intelligent writer like you praise the writing. Thank you 🙂
thanks for saying that. but the piece deserved nothing less. Keep emoting through your poems. 🙂
I will surely try my beat , thanks once again 🙂
🙂
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क्या बात है बहुत खूब!
बेहद ख़ूबसूरत:-)
अभार आपका , 🙂
I hope all well Doc ,quite along while nai ??
Hey ! All good and thanks , first friend on blog you are , was wondering where vanished.. Plz take care and have a happy day
Same here:)
🙂 thanku 🙂
Such a lovely poem..you write such a way that people will always search for next post the next min they end your one post..:)
Thank you so much for the kind words it motivates me to write the next .. Please do Keep visiting 🙂 and encourage me like this always
Thank ypu
You
I feel like, I am struggling to read Hindi now a days 😛
hahaha ,,Gujrati mein likhun .. lol !!
Haha, fir toh hum padh bhi nahi payenge. Hindi is better 😛
waise mein kahan likh paungi .. Btw I am not Gujrati
LoL, that was a surprise! Toh fir kahan se ho?
I am from Rajasthan
Oh okay 🙂 Main bhi Jodhpur main 3 saal raha hoon
I never stayed ..Irony
LoL, cool 😉
🙂
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