उलझनें


Kal tak meri adatein pasand thi, 
Aaj unhi se sari pareshaniyan hai tumhe .

Laton mein uljhi ungliyon ko suljhatei na thakte thei kabhi , 

aaj latein hi uljhanei hein un ungliyon ke liye … “Nivedita”


कल तक मेरी आदतें पसंद थी , आज उनसे ही सारी परेशानियाँ  हैं तुम्हें ..

जिन लटों में उलझी उँगलियों को सुलझाते न थकते थे कभी 

आज वो लटें ही उलझनें हैं उन उँगलियों के लिए ।.. “निवेदिता”


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39 responses to “उलझनें”

  1. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

    It usually happens that monotony takes over in relationships. And when relationships become that way, everything that the other hand loved turns blue. Sad story of relationships.
    There are things, however that we could do to avoid this.
    Nice one , girl. 🙂 A painful thought though

  2. Nikhil Avatar
    Nikhil

    बहुत खूब!

  3. DILKASH SHAYARI Avatar

    क्या बात है बहुत खूब

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  4. fairytaleofasimplegirl Avatar

    Wow it’s like ur describing a usual married life in ur own artistic way. N how did you edited the pics with hindi poem on it. It’s amazing

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Thank you Swapnil, your words of appreciation always brings smile on my face :). Its easy use any photo editor app , and write the text on it ..:)

      1. fairytaleofasimplegirl Avatar

        Itana accha nahi hota..trust me

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      yes , and Thanks for stopping by ..

      1. ssunshine14 Avatar

        Always Welcome 🙂

  5. swamiyesudas Avatar

    वाह! बहुत खूब, निवेदिता! …ऐसी उलझनें तेरी जिंदगी में कभी न आयें! 🙂

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      प्रणाम आप बड़ों के आशीर्वाद से कभी नहीं आएँगे .. 🙂

  6. Nitin Avatar

    lovely nivedita. in two lines you told the story of an aging relationship. 🙂

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Thank you Nitin for the praise .. Glad you liked 🙂

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Thanks a tonne Pranav for visiting:)

  7. Maniparna Sengupta Majumder Avatar

    Beautiful…. time can even erode love…

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Yes true Mani , I have been hearing and seeing this around me ..

    2. bhaatdal Avatar

      Mani please see my post “following you” as i have written a photo story as you
      Wanted me to write something on Shillong 🙂 though a lot more to come journey to Shillong has begin just now once again .. 🙂

      1. Maniparna Sengupta Majumder Avatar

        Great…can you please share the link? I’m eager to read it… 🙂

  8. swamiyesudas Avatar

    I think that little icon says: gif, gif. But all I am getting is a small rectangle with those words. But much Appreciated, my Dear Nivedita! 🙂

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Hath jodkar pranam , the icon ..

      1. swamiyesudas Avatar

        Thank You! That is Lovely! Blessings, my Dear, and Love. 🙂

        1. bhaatdal Avatar

          🙂 thank yu reagards

  9. Nisthur Anadi Avatar

    So deep and very beautiful.

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      thank you Nisthurji , after a long time …. Thanks for reading and praising 🙂

      1. Nisthur Anadi Avatar

        My pleasure to appreciate you for your work and as person as well.

        Thanks for giving me opportunity to feel good after appreciating you.

        1. bhaatdal Avatar

          Thank you Nisthur ji , It is sheer pleasure

          1. Nisthur Anadi Avatar

            It’s mutual I believe

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