समान -ए-ज़िंदगी 

बाँध समान  -ए- ज़िंदगी चल पड़े अगले पड़ाओ पर ,

नूर -ए- बेहिस्ती की शामियाना यहां दिलों क हर कस्बे में बस्ता है ,

और खानाबदोशी मेरे जज़्बे में है। …. निवेदिता 


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19 responses to “समान -ए-ज़िंदगी ”

  1. extinct0703 Avatar

    Wahh wahh Bahot khoob, Khanabadoshi mere jazbe mein hai, Kya kehne.

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Thank you so much

  2. Nitin Avatar

    Really nice Nivedita 🙂

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

  3. Rajiv Avatar

    Wow. Cool poetry!

    1. bhaatdal Avatar
  4. ANM7 Avatar

    Buen viaje (good journeying).

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Thank you Angel 🙂 I am so glad you liked it but such a short one , not your type 🙂

    2. bhaatdal Avatar

      Which language is it ? I am so glad everytime I get to learn a new word from you in new language

      1. ANM7 Avatar

        It is Spanish and made famous in a remarkably beautiful song. Sung by my favorite and most beloved singer; Javier Solis (Mexican) Here is the song; https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tycgHs5Np7k

        1. bhaatdal Avatar

          Thanks a tonne dear for sharing the link and the beautiful comment

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