Acid Burns 

I was forced to die ,

But my spirit kept me alive,

rising from the ashes,

Slowly and gradually ,

I will start living again,

the pain of being burned ,

Will heal with time, 

But whenever I will see ,

My reflection in the mirror,

I will be horrified,

Again will feel the same ,

Agony if burns will rise,

Rage will rise,

The blood in my veins,

Will boil like the heat of Sun,

The wounds they gave ,

Will get healed ,

But the scars will remain,

Throughout my Life , 

I will never be the same again .. Nivedita 

P.S. : I hope that such henious act will come to a complete end soon.


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23 responses to “Acid Burns ”

  1. RamandiPreet Avatar

    Not one person responsible for this… We are all responsible… I think strict law can decrease crime rate.

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      You are right bhai, The main reasons behind such acts are the Man chauvinism in India . The ego is very high and I don’t know for what and why. Thank you for reading and your valuable support. It always matters to me and I know that you know it very well.

  2. bhaatdal Avatar

    Haha ye thanku Bhai ko nahin ek sensitive aur sensible Man ko hai , every man has to be like u 🙂

  3. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

    I hear about such incidents every day. It is the mentality of the male dominated society that has to change. The thought that you own someone and that you should destroy it at the end of ownership.
    Sad objectification !

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      I totally agree to it Sonu , and I am feeling blessed to read this comments from u my friend . When youth like you all are around we still have a ray of hope and faith.

      1. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

        Thanks mate. How I wish I could walk out like a vigilante and teach all those cowards a lesson. I wish. But yes, change starts within and when we teach a new generation to consider women as a continuum and the ones that nurture the world into existence, a major problem gets solved ….

        1. bhaatdal Avatar

          Don’t worry , Till Men like you exist we still have a ray of hope 🙂

          1. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

            Awwww. Thank you darl !!
            I appreciate the acceptance

  4. Sangbad Avatar

    Wonderful…the issue has been well described through words…
    Thanks for following…expecting to see your reviews and likes on my posts..

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Thank you and yes it is quite sensitive issue to be taken care of..
      Following your blog is a pleasure and Hope you will like my posts too and will follow back

      1. Sangbad Avatar

        Yes I’m liking them and following you…re: sensitive issues, here’s a link to an essay I had wrote few weeks back on three issues that prevail in society…this is the last part of the trilogy…the link to other parts are there in the essay…will like to know your view on them…
        https://thoughtsofwordsblog.wordpress.com/2017/03/22/14085/

        1. bhaatdal Avatar

          I will surely read very soon 🙂

        2. bhaatdal Avatar

          Thanks for sharing it , will read the essay soon

          1. Sangbad Avatar

            will wait for your reviews…thoughts on them..

  5. Aanchal Avatar

    Each and every word is expressed so nicely. A much needed Post. Great Job !

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Thank you Anchal , happy you liked it :):)

  6. Maniparna Sengupta Majumder Avatar

    Acid attack is such a cowardly act and an unpardonable one! Every word of your poem oozes the pain, agony and anger of a victim…

  7. bedtimestories511 Avatar

    Acid Attack is a shameless and heinous act, to be condemned in all its form…I am glad that you have written such nice post on it…

  8. bhaatdal Avatar

    Thats what .. and it hurts

    1. amazingishi Avatar

      Kabhi aayiye humari galli bhi

      1. bhaatdal Avatar

        Bilkul aayenge chutkums bas kuch din aur .. after 1st will read all 🙂 ab mere exams chal rahe hain

  9. extinct0703 Avatar

    Speechless for your words, ashamed to be a part of this society.

  10. Harshad Datar Avatar

    True. Acid gives scars to the psyche that are impossible to heal. Penalty for acid attack should be death because the victim is worst than dead (murdered)

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