स्वयं तो सांस लेने के काबिल भी नहीं
पर “मैं” में कमी कत्तई नहीं ..
ले उधार की सांसे..
कल को जीने निकल पड़ती हूं हर आज ..
निन्यानबे के फेर में सांसे छूटती नहीं..
एक तेरे आने की आस है जो टूटती नहीं..
“ज्योत्सना” #निवेदिता
उधार की सांसें
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6 responses to “उधार की सांसें”
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Hhmm this was very very interesting. I like Hindi stories and poems even though I have to translate them and don’t always fully get their gist right away haha
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Thanks.. I am fighting with COVID after effects… Suffering from Pneumonia I have to be on oxygen support.. while on support This thought clicke my mind and I penned it.. the crux is a Human even when is not in a condition to breath is proud of himself or herself of his or her doings.. Till the last breath One cannot leave cravings and cribbings behind.
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Yes it does but it’s alot better alternative than me being clueless hahaha
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Right, your personal experience and the fact that you told it in english are primarily the things that makes it a must read for me hahaha.
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सांसों की चलती जब तक
सतत निरंतर डोर
निन्यानबे के फेर में उलझे
मन को कभी न आता याद
है आत्मस्थ जो एक वह
जो कभी न जाता दूर …-
Bahut sunder
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