What do I want
Nothing out of the way
Just a little care when I am away
Far far away …
How do I feel
Just what a fish out of water
A teardropp in a loud laughter
Love in a heart of a hater..
When you are away
Far far away …
How am I lost ?
Like my Soul in yours
Like a rain drop in the ocean
A pinch of Sugar in my Tea
Nectar in Honey
Foot prints on the Bay
A Loner whole night busiest in the day
When We are Far away far Far away …
by
Such a beautiful one. Loved this one!
Thank you 🙂
Very nice one. Oneness expressed in the last stanza. Merged effortlessly 🙂
Thank you My lines are my feelings cant write all the time .. न छंद है न अलंकार है ,न खनक न झंकार है , बस भावों की परिकल्पना ,लेखनी में किया साकार है..
Very well written.
धन्यवाद
Very emotional!
Thanku:)
Mostly I love reading English stories , but loved this poetry written from your heart . Do read my Book : Journey from Guwahati to Machhiwara if you have time .
Thanku Rajiv , I will surely read the book as the title is very close to my heart because as my real life journey is Guwahati to Delhi … :):)
That’s great . Mam you should be able to identify with some of the characters you have never met . Book available from Notion Press @ Rs 200 from a first time Author @63
Sir loved the book already read .
Loved it 🙂
Thank you:)
🙂
You never told that you ordered my Book . Any ways waiting for your Review of my Book on Amazon or Notion Press & also on your Blog !
Sir , I bought it from “Oxford Chabar ” 🙂 I will write the review very soon
Oxford Chabar is a Book store or online store in India or abroad ?
Sir, it is in Delhi @Cannaught Place “N” Block , Oxford Book Store . named as “Chabar ” earlier it was in Statesman House .
Waiting for your Review . Now my Book in all big cities stores
In a couple of days sir , Happy Navratri
Same to you . I know you must be Busy in the fasts .
🙂 yes and pooja by the Grace of Maa Kamakhya . may she blesses all of us with happiness and prosperity
Very well expressed. Cherished the way you let the words flow.
N number of Thanks ..
Thanks to you for such wonderful posts.
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