Confronting the Battleship.
Love makes the World go Round,
and keep thy Lover Abound………
With Deeper Love smiling profound .
He admires her smile and her tingling sound,
Her Eyes, her lips…..
Pray to Lord Their Strong Love,
Keep Ringing Like the Bell
Fragrance of Happiness Surround the lovely Castle…. “Nivedita”
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Beautiful 🙂
Thank you for your kind comment. Glad you visited .
Wow !! thankyou for reading and praising 🙂
Lovely poem. And the graphics do complement each other so well. Best wishes
Thank you for the kind wishes and words 🙂
It’s cool and LOVACHCHHADIT (With love) poem !!
Thank You Riteshji 🙂 🙂
Dear Nived…
Beautifully Put! Love moves the world 🙂
Thankyou for your generous words … I am obliged
I love it. It is light like the alighting of a butterfly, yet brings more sweetness to the senses. The title betells a warning. A place not foreign to defense. Nice, also has lovely sensibilities. Conveyed innocently with security and hope. thanks for sharing, and if you can, apprise me of other English language stuff I could read. Thank you Jyot (I’ve recalled this from memory; IE could be a misspelling of your name).
Thanku so much Sire 🙂 your support always lighten up my eyes with joy and always in a wait of your comment . I know it is two opposite Worlds but it proves that World is so small in India we say “Wasudhev Kutumbakam” It means whole World is our Home so a Good night means a Good morning means a Good night 🙂 but Good is common on both the ends :):)
Thanks for such humbling respect. And for the lesson on “Hindi” (“Whole…world…home”). I like the explanation, “Good, both ends”.
🙂 🙂 My pleasure 🙂
N btw u spelled right jyot, jyoti , jyotsna all means the same all means Light , Jyotsna in specific means Moon light 🙂
No wonder you have such goodwill; Your name explains it. Your Parents prepared you with that name.
How I wish you could read Hindi today I wrote ditto same , Thanking and showing gratitude to my parents for bringing me as Jyotsna in their World by Nivedita”( my writing name ) which means (woman who requests ) Aa it is their Anniversary today and my 10 year olds bday 🙂 you were right about the like minded theory :):)
It is the will of God, for me not knowing to read it. If I were able to, I might levitate off the ground from so much goodness presented in one sitting (lol). But don’t sweat it, all is good. Likely you will produce better works yet (knowing it must have been good, judging by the special day). Be at peace, know you will. Hey, maybe I will wake up tomorrow speaking Hindi. You are so kind. I’m honored to know you, enjoy this lovely day of celebrations, dear.
हाहा haha .. Lol good night
Good night
N I am a very simple and a small human with not any great goodwill just that my will is good and where there is a will there is a way .. Thanks once again for your kind words
Sincerely welcomed. Yours is the best correspondence I receive.
So nicely penned… evocative… 🙂
Thank u so much for the kind words and praises
My pleasure absolutely… 🙂
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You are modest . Shubheccha 🙂
Tomakeo..shubheccha… 🙂
🙂 ki bolbe kicchu bolte pari na . Speechless , so so happy to converse in my third language :* after ages .. Dhonyobad
Third language…but you are quite efficient in it. Bhashar byapare tomaar alada skill achhe, I must say…. 🙂
Apnar motte shundor jani na .. Apni toh ki darun . Ami toh shobdo paye na .. Kintu bolte hobe ki blessed I am found a friend just like bhaator shonge Daal .. Ai rokom Bhaat Daal 😉
Hehe :-D….daarun…very well said..apt analogy…
🙂 🙂 Good Night
And thanks once again keep visiting and sharing your thoughts . I dont know why not able to comment on your Post Periwinkled , I loved the photo and the words as a child i remember calling the flower as Sadabahar found everywhere in Assam .. 🙂 the photograph soothes the eyes 🙂
Oh…no issues. Comment is closed for that post 🙂 I really appreciate your gesture…in Bengali it’s called Nayantara… 🙂
Yuppp so in akhomiya
Very well written. ☺️ Beautiful thoughts penned in so many fantastic amazing ways.
Thanku so much dear :* m so glad you read it . Thanks for the kind words once again 🙂
Since morning was feeling of missing something, few minutes back realised I haven’t read much good things today so first thought struck of visiting your blog and here I am served with such a fabulous poem, so deep and profound.
Oh how sweet , profounded 🙂 I am always Short of words in expressing gratitude and so I am right now :):)
Nope …
Beautifully crafted. Theres another poem you started with a bang of a sentence. You haven’t failed here either. “Battle of love” – I loved it. You’ve also written how “HE” admires her eyes , her lips and her sound…. I can’t help but think how lucky you are. You are truly an art in yourself then 🙂
Thank you so much what a compliment , wow … Speechless i am no words just :):):):):):) 🙂 fictions are good for life and here is one from you ” an art in yourself ” thank a tonne once again . 🙂 🙂 i feel blessed right now 🙂
Reading through is a pleasure, mate. 😉 I mean it, your blog is wonderful and everything you write has life there. Humble and profound.
Thank you dear delighted with the generosity. I dont know what uou found so profound i just write simple words ,whatever I feel that moment .
Mate, there are two kinds of writers . One that is totally embraces literature, the ones like me. Then we have the ones like you who touch people’s mind with a conversation kind of language. It makes one feel that you are talking to them. You write in simple words about things you see, and thats the beauty of it.
Literature is needed much only when you have to stick to fiction. Writing in layman’s language is beauty, nevertheless. For the kind of things you write, simple words are a cherry on the cake.
Oh my !! I dont think i need to say after all this except ,Thank you 🙂 quite encouraging and motivating , I shall try to keep up to the expectations which is a real tough job. Thanks once again 🙂
Just do what you do best. 😉 You need no advice from me 🙂
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