Love ! Love !  

Sometimes I feel Like a maniac , in an asylum , running here and there, rolling in the roller coaster, days are so hectic and above all, monotonous.

Morning bells , and I get up , time for kids to go school than cook for lunch , rushing office , coming back and rush to kitchen . All day same ,Huh!! In the meanwhile I try and take out time to blog . ” I love reading more than writing  thats why I dont write regular ” so , as usual started reading the posts .

I read four posts today, one of them refreshed me to the core , that too at One at night,  forcing me to write this , felt like writing a poem but later thought just express in prose . As three out of four were  poems on love , and the best part all positive . Feeling so happy to see happiness and love around . Sitting beside , filling the gap , knowing the winters , cuddled in arms . All sound so gloomy ,and dreamy . Truth is Dream is my land where I live, live my soul the real me . A virtual World  better than life  , seemed like love is in air , everyone around me is in love . I am flying on the seventh cloud . 🙂 🙂 another seven .. Seven colours , seven sins , seven notes now seventh cloud  , oh it reminded of another seven came to know yesterday , any ways…

Coming back to the blogs and the Poetries.  Oh my! All talking about her , her smiles , hugs , cuddles , all the girls are lucky no doubt and so must be the boys to have them ofcourse,  Flowers of Love  blooming , in the gardens of life 🙂 and air filled with Love .. “Nivedita”


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28 responses to “Love ! Love !  ”

  1. dhirajanand Avatar

    Loved reading the post about Love, Love Love, it’s Lovely, filled with Love. Being or not being, even thinking of Love gives that immense feeling.

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      🙂 it sounds like already heard somewhere .. Must be .. Really thankful Dhiraj ji for your compliment . The four letter word is full of magic no doubt
      .. It creates wonders

  2. ANM7 Avatar

    What a soul thou possesses, market it, put it in a bottle, ship it to all the ports worldwide, let everyone drink at that fountain, let it explode over cities and inspire the sunsets, the moonlight, especially.

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      I know you are pulling my leg angel , but I am taking it as compliment .. Meaoow MAO

      1. ANM7 Avatar

        No, it is intended to compliment the bubbliness, the vigor, that is all, but yes based on my past conduct, you are correct to keep your distance and be skeptical. Awesome.

        1. bhaatdal Avatar

          Noooo I was just kidding , if u can comment on the Hindi post I can tease angel as well … Remember give and take relationship .. Lol 🙂

  3. shanejeet Avatar

    so your thinking is full of love, you sight is full of true emotions….. you have high note of thinking, you are just like true music…..jo sache unche ishq ki kahani gunguna rha hai……. tariif ke kabil apki lekhni apka nazriya.

    Shukriya itni khubsurat post share krne ke liye.

    Thanks sister 🙂

  4. Ishita Lakra Avatar

    Beautifully written. Made me smile. 🙂

    1. bhaatdal Avatar
    2. bhaatdal Avatar

      I am glad it made you smile .. Keep smiling 🙂

  5. dilipnaidu Avatar

    Bahut behtarein! Shukriya.

  6. fairytaleofasimplegirl Avatar

    If I haven’t read what wonders u write in hindi n how beautiful poems u create I d have said nicely written article. But I hv seen better

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Oh so so touched thankyou dear fairy .. You are very generous and kind no doubt , wat is your good name friend . I am jyotsna or Nivedita whatever you wanna call . Thank you thankyou for the compliments .

      1. fairytaleofasimplegirl Avatar

        My name is swapnil n u d b amazed to know I hv two very dear people in life named jyotsana n nivedita. … I guess name itself create sparkle in the lives…they both r bright too

        1. bhaatdal Avatar

          Oh wow thats very sweet and strange . Another collection of jyotsna for u

      2. fairytaleofasimplegirl Avatar

        But I d like to u bhaat daal….I so loved it. …I keep reading too n love debating over a topic n just read….saw so many blogs some with really nice stuffs but nothing beats bhaat dal…can’t get over it..

        1. bhaatdal Avatar

          Nething you like you can call ., and Crticism and advices are always welcome

    2. bhaatdal Avatar

      🙂 no words to show the gratitude . Flattered I am .. 🙂

  7. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

    Beautifully crafted words. If only I knew how to read Hindi.

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Thank you , and the crux is there in the prose 🙂

      1. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

        I noticed. I liked the way you have put it. 🙂

        1. bhaatdal Avatar
    2. rajivbakshi Avatar

      Me too looking for a tutor in Hindi .

      1. bhaatdal Avatar

        🙂 my pleasure sir , but there is lot to learn from you yet, I am not even near by your knowledge and experience Sir, I am obliged by your appreciation , it motivates me a lot

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