ओढनी ओढ़े डूब की
सुररखि (Lady bird beetel )लगी इतराय ,
सूखी रूंख दरख की ,
चादर झीनी होय जाये
रंग प्रेम बदरंग भयो
रंगरेज़ ढूंढूं कित पाये
बद्री बरसे नेह की ,
जब पिया की पाती आये .. @———” Nivedita “
सुररखि(Lady bird beetel )
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24 responses to “सुररखि(Lady bird beetel )”
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Seriously I need to take tutorials on writing such amazing poems.
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Ye thora zyada ho gaya .. Modesty is … Whatever it is right now sounding like you . ,
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One side you ask me to try writing poems and on other side asking me to be modest, I seriously need to understand how to write poem.
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Ur so right nearly extinct. Even I ll take tutions. Just tell me the dates
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Now thats flattery ..
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I hardly flatter…I m very blunt in my real life…but yeah can’t stop praising if I like something. ..love
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Thank you swapnil , I am really glad you are liking it . As i alwAys feel bitter truth is better than sweet lies .
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Same life philosophy
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ठीक बात .
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Your Hindi is too strong for me to understand 🙂
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Oh is it i will try to write easy or start writing a small translation along 🙂
Your world is blessed indeed
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Hey this poem means .. I went to pluck grass for pooja and saw the ladybird beetle covering herself with the leaf of that grass ,the green colour was looking so beautiful that she looked like bride waiting for her groom to come and take her . But he did not come and sends her a letter which when she recieves tears rolls down from her eyes ;(
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I love it. Beautiful. I wish I could have read it.
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Me too wish the same
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itni sundar feeling apni poem mein uch lfzo mein byaan krna…… jinti taarif ho km hai apki.
Mujhe bhi zarurat hai apse seekhte rehne ki….. tips dena ji mujhe bhi.
You are a fantastic
Sureakhi? Wow so that’s wat a better is called. How do u even think such beautiful things
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Gratitude to my teachers all their blessings . I am glad you liked my writing . Thank you so much 🙂
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Plz write something more on devi or sprituality in hindi…may b a poem….hope I can demand…its just can’t wait
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I will try my best , i wish i can come up to your expectations
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That was beautiful, Nivedita 🙂
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Thank you very much 🙂
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