Jyotsna “Nivedita”

 न राग न झंकार , 

शब्दों की चित्रकार हूँ 

भावों की अभिव्यक्ति हूँ ,

न कवी न कलाकार हूँ। 

नारी हूँ सबल हूँ ,

सशक्त हूँ कोमल हूँ ,

स्त्रोत हूँ  उद्गम का ,

खुशियों  का संसार हूँ  ,

ममता भरी छांव हूँ ,

वृद्धि का  पसार हूँ ,

तारों की शीतलता ,

सूर्य का तेज हूँ , तो 

चंद्र की “ज्योत्स्ना “हूँ मैं। 

क्रोध के प्रतियुत्तर में ,

ज्वाला और ताप हूँ ,

वहीँ वेदना में निवेदित ,

विनम्र “निवेदिता”1461531118126 हूँ में।

I am, a Womanwho also can express  herself in simple words by writing , sketching or painting ,packing  , photography ,

a Woman ..who is a mother ,a daughter ,a wife leading her Life towards progress and happiness .

In me, there is a reflection of a collage of so many emotions..

I am strong,

 I am weak , 

I am aggressive,

 I am polite , 

I am  beautiful

but my tears are ugly

I am love 

I am hatred

I am progress

I am urge and tender

as I am “NIVEDITA”(one who plea)( my pen name)

I am cold as Moonlight 

as I am “Jyotsna “

I am , want to be …..

 

 

 

Comments

60 responses to “Jyotsna “Nivedita””

  1. JD Avatar

    I guess, you forgot to edit this page 😀

  2. bhaatdal Avatar

    :):) got not words to express about me .. 😉

  3. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

    Your new theme and the background looks beautiful. Syncs well with the kind of content you have on your blog. The first picture of a muddy road amidst the forest trees- psychedelic trance for me.
    And now when I came to this page… a typewriter . It just got awesome. I have an uncanny obsession with type writers.
    Once again. Awesome theme, just like you 😉 :*

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Thank you Sonu , you have praised like i have designed the theme, I just chose a theme no efforts of mine , but thank you for the lovely words. You are very kind ,encouraging and good ofcourse.

      1. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

        😀 I was just praising your taste. I won’t be surprised even if you designed it 😛
        Thank you, Nivedita. My expressions from within 😉

        1. bhaatdal Avatar

          Hehehe .. Thank you thank you even for the exaggeration

          1. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

            Lol…. You’re such a kid 😛 😀 😉

          2. bhaatdal Avatar

            Correction! Mother of a kid 🙂

          3. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

            Ohoo. 😀 Mother of a kid with charm. Howzaat?

          4. bhaatdal Avatar
  4. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

    Thank you, for following me again 😛

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Oye I never unfollowed it was by mistake:) hey help me how to put that smile logo .. Plz

      1. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

        Haha. I knew. I was just pulling your legs.
        Just download the image and add it as featured image to your post 🙂

    2. bhaatdal Avatar

      how to copy the logo and the title plz help

      1. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

        Im so sorry. Been away for a while.
        First, download the image. Then, on your left side while you are writing the post, you’d see a featured image option, add it there.

        1. bhaatdal Avatar

          Okay in a while I will try and check your email dude 🙂

          1. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

            I’ve got nothing on my email 😀 Which email are you talking about , girl 😉

          2. bhaatdal Avatar

            Let me check and restart all

          3. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

            I’ve already send you a mail. 🙂

          4. Sonu Somaraj Avatar
          5. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

            Great. Finally 😀

          6. bhaatdal Avatar

            Now try posting comment as well

          7. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

            And I can’t thank you enough now. You are a Beaaaautttiiiiffuuull woman :*

          8. bhaatdal Avatar

            🙂 flattering

          9. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

            How do I have you believe ? 😛

          10. bhaatdal Avatar

            mein dharatal par hi theek hun 🙂

          11. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

            :p If you say so 😉

          12. bhaatdal Avatar

            sukhi jeewan ka falsafa hai .. aisi udaan mat bhar jahan se gire par par toot jayein .. 🙂 baas jiyej rahi hun sach man kar 🙂 above all day by day getting older better to keep the feet firm on Earth .. samjhe I am humbled by your humility ..

          13. Sonu Somaraj Avatar

            Maardala 😉
            Getting older is an ornament only the lucky can carry. And you carry it beautifully. Your words are like the grace of the morning sun and a sweet lullaby at the same time. 🙂

  5. swamiyesudas Avatar

    My Dear Nivedita, Please put Your name in this page. Love and Blessings. 🙂

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      I will .. Regards

    2. bhaatdal Avatar

      swamiji regards , I have written my name and about me , thank you for the guidance , regards ..:)

  6. Majka Avatar

    Thank you very much for stopping by 🙂 I appreciate it very much 🙂

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      My pleasure, keep sharing:)

  7. extinct0703 Avatar

    Highly impressive!

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      :):) सहर्ष धन्यवाद

  8. bloggeray Avatar

    Hello Jyotsana,

    Some way of introducing yourself to the world through a bilingual poem. It is very beautiful to see and read. Thank you for the follow on my blog. And oh, your blog’s tagline is killer too. Happy blogging, God bless. 🙂

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Hey Hi, Thanks for the kind words .I am glad you liked the names 🙂 and the tag line.:) Its a pleasure to read a wonderful writer and to have him on the blog. Happy Blogging to you too..:) stay blessed 🙂

  9. doc2poet Avatar

    Hey! Congratulations…I have nominated you for ‘One lovely blog award’ & ‘Sunshine blogger award’. Kindly visit the following link for more information @ https://doc2poet.wordpress.com/2016/09/30/sunshine-blogger-award/ . Thank you 🙂

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      hey Thank you so much dear , I am delighted 🙂

      1. doc2poet Avatar

        The pleasure is all mine. You are a positive force for many new bloggers like me and perfectly resonate with the words sunshine & lovely…I wish you all the best Jyotsana:-)

        1. bhaatdal Avatar

          kya bol rahe ho ?? you are insane , you are anytime a wonderful writer , a Doctor a writer a painter an allrounder , serving mankind and inspiring the youth through writing .. Amazing you are . I come no where nearby your writing ,,n thanks for the wishes . I wish you the same Happy Navaratri to you and your family 🙂

  10. bhaatdal Avatar

    The feel is mutual Amit

  11. bhaatdal Avatar

    :):):) hi how r u ?

    1. doc2poet Avatar

      Hey! I am good…jst a little busy these days…wish you a happy and green diwali…my best wishes 🙂

      1. bhaatdal Avatar

        Hey thanks , and wish the same to you and your family :):)

  12. Ananya Sharma. Avatar

    Ma’am, the tagline of your blog is just simply splendid. <3

  13. Anindya Avatar

    Nice to go through your blog….following it…..:)…..hope to see you sometimes in my blog musicalsoundscapes too….:)

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Thanks a lot will surely follow your blog and read the posts very soon 🙂

  14. Rupali Avatar

    Thank you Nivedita for visiting my blog. I am so glad we met. Hope we meet again!
    Happy Blogging.

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      We will regularly meet , it is a pleasure 🙂

  15. Anindya Avatar

    Nice intro Nivedita……yes words written are the perfect medium of expression of a myriad of feelings………love the way you use both Hindi and English to express…………thanks for visiting my blog…..:)

    1. bhaatdal Avatar

      Hey Anindya halo 🙂 do you know you visited my blog on 6th March and complimented me for the same “Nivedita” and again

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